The author used QUOTES to strengthen, materialize, and highlight their argument.
Very convincing and emotion filled!
The author used interesting sentence structure and had a very entertaining way of expressing her passion for books.
Love the language, it's quite enthusiastic and really catches your attention.The essay was really informative and actually made me more interested in playing video games myself.
The author used alot of repetition to make the point he/she is trying to make stand out.
The author used a personal experience of hers to help explain what she believed in. It helped get her point across.
Emotional anecdotes are used very well to help price the author's point.
The author strongly stated her belief in the entrance statement.
Author gives a great timeline of events, to help the reader understand the story better.
The author allows the reader to imagine being in his shoes.
Very stirring and emotional. Quite depressing yet informative in a certain way
It's written in a way that feels like the author is talking directly to you, instead of reading from a piece of paper, and I like that!
The author made valid points and used facts as back up for those points
The author explains her belief using stories about her personal experiences.
The author of this article used an example of her personal experiences to support her beliefs. It has a large impact on the whole article.
Really profound essay with a good use of anecdotes.
This essay really spoke to me and he did an excellent job tellin very thing how it is in such a simple yet profound and elegant way.
The author was clear with his message and didn't use too many words to make a point:
Uses humor well; she tells of a goofy thing her dad did, which made me chuckle
The author uses hyperboles to exaggerate his points.
I liked the way the author used facts to support his reasoning
I learned that facing your fears is a good thing, and the author strengthened this point with personal example as well as problems she faced when attempting to do this.
The author was strong with his writing but he was not invasive or pushy.
The author is very convincing with her writing in telling you how her condition can be changed with the right people.
The author talks about interesting facts and an interesting subject
I like how the author described their transformation in detail and connected the time from when they were different to how they are now.
The first paragraph catches the readers attention and then she follows it with a personal experience.
I like the way the author worded things and really described things in a way that was easy to picture.
This essay was very heartwarming and the author did a good job with the flow of sentences
The author used vivid imagery and appealed to our emotions in order to convey a powerful message about love, diversity, and acceptance.
The author used personal experiences to convey their point
The author was very clear about his message.
The author gave me a story that many people could relate to, including myself.
The essay had a moving story
The author described the animal really well and it intrigued me
The flow was smooth and the essay was very descriptive.
I like how in the essay it says that he was determined to be successful and that he did. He completed his goal in life to be successful even if its not what he imagined when he was younger. So it really spoke out to me.
The essay was very mysterious and interesting.
The author wrote the essay traditionally, by listing what she would talk about and then writing a paragraph for each topic
Amazingly stunning use of vocabulary. Author was very clear, pretty interesting.
Very interesting and moving, I was really interested in what the author had to say.
I feel that the author was very strong in there feelings and what they thought. They have spicific evidence and they explained what they had to say
The author uses hyperbole to show how strongly they feel about the topic.
Great article in the way he conveyed his feelings
The aouthor used alot of worlds and stats that help you understand a world view and gave his opinion to help support the article
I liked how the author discussed imperfection, yet maintained a very positive tone throughout the entire piece.
The author made sure his message was understood and put lots of effort and thought into this.
The essay I read was more of a poem than an essay, and had beautiful usage of imagery and anecdotal evidence to make a clear and poignant point.
recognized her flaws, and wanted to learn from them
I noticed that both authors stated their beliefs outright at the beginning of the article. I liked knowing what the story would be about before I read further, and it was effective in drawing me in to read the article.
This story exemplified the importance of giving compliments, by saying how easy they are to give but they can really lift a person up
In this essay the author used life events in the essay that allowed it to be easier to connect to instead of simply being words that appear together that form an essay.
The author of this essay used descriptive imagery to truly pull the reader into his shoes; while still maintaining a fairly comedic tone.
The author conveyed his emotions through the use of words that invoke emotional response. He also had smooth transitions between the past and present.
We thought that the piece was very touching, and impacted how we view other people who are more "outside the box". Some of these we do ourselves, everyone has their weird moments like when we are in the car and forget people can actually see us of just alone in our rooms.
"I Learned Happiness" was a very poignant essay, describing how the author was able to find true happiness in her life. The author's use of quotes strengthened her overall point in the article that "love and hope are happiness."
The author made some excellent points, and I think that the way she chose to organize her thoughts made it very easy to relate to as well as very inspiring. Not only could this article appeal to the minds of young people, but everyone because everybody has been in this situation at one point in their life. We have all been that teenager that nobody wants to hear from.
I appreciated how the author wrote the essay in a way that teenage readers can relate and really understand her point of view.
The essay I read captured what the title said, it gave a personal point of view of different situations close to her that explained the idea that humans are pretty much the same regardless of their differences.
The author had a clear message and a good use of personal experiences, though they didn't use anecdotes.
After reading I learned the true meaning of happiness which comes from love and family
I liked that the author alternated between telling her story and explaining the significance of it.
They use good imagery and took the reader to that moment.
The use of imagery made this essay intresting to read!
We thought that this was a really moving piece, as it gave us a new view on an old place.
Very technical. I found the quote very interesting at the beginning. I think quoted are very useful in writing and he used it well and he related it to other subjects.
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